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Reply To: The Ring of Saturn (short story)

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mikeronni
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I loved this story so much! The art is expressive and detailed–the piano and stargazing scenes blew me away. The story and dynamic between the characters was emotional yet incredibly subtle and realistic. I was really glad you didn’t go the route of so many other stories by adding needless drama or over-romantacized fluff.

Your atmospheric style, and Miriam’s expressions and mannerisms while playing, definitely helped capture the emotions behind the songs. It was great reading the chapters while listening to the pieces.

I was a bit confused–but intrigued!–by the ending. What is the connection between the chemist and Raz? Is there more to Miriam’s story or do you intend to plore the lives of other characters? Either way, I’d love to read more from this world!